一篇文章轻松搞定《英语聚会作文》的写作。（精选5篇）

更新日期:2025-05-28 05:26

写作核心提示：

写一篇关于英语聚会的作文时，以下是一些需要注意的事项：
1. "主题明确"： - 确保作文有一个清晰的主题，比如描述聚会的氛围、目的、参与者的互动等。
2. "结构完整"： - 作文应包含引言、正文和结论三个部分。 - 引言部分简要介绍聚会背景和目的。 - 正文部分详细描述聚会的具体内容和感受。 - 结论部分总结聚会的重要性和个人的收获。
3. "语言表达"： - 使用正确的英语语法和词汇。 - 注意句子的流畅性和连贯性。 - 避免语法错误和拼写错误。
4. "细节描写"： - 描述聚会的时间、地点、参与者、活动等细节。 - 使用五感（视觉、听觉、嗅觉、味觉、触觉）来丰富描述，让读者有身临其境的感觉。
5. "个人观点"： - 表达自己对聚会的个人看法和感受。 - 讨论聚会对你个人或他人可能产生的影响。
6. "文化敏感性"： - 尊重不同文化背景的参与者，避免使用可能引起误解或冒犯的词汇。 - 如果涉及到跨文化交流，可以讨论文化差异和适应。
7. "逻辑性"： - 确保文章的逻辑清晰，段落之间过渡自然。 - 使用适当的过渡词或短语

英语作文《师生聚会》《外国人眼中的中国》“思维可视化”AI咋想

文/刘宝彩/天津

看到AI对刘宝彩英语写作方的点评如下：

刘宝彩英语写作方法，AI称，帮助解析刘宝彩老师的英语写作教学体系以逻辑思维为核心，强调摆脱模板化写作的束缚。其方法主要体现为以下三个特点:

第一点，注重因果逻辑的立体构建。不同于传统写作教学中简单的“原因-结果“线性思维刘老师提出"四维逻辑框架":一因一果、一因多果、多因一果、多因多果。如在《师生聚会》作文中，既描写老师严格教学带来的直接效果(学生英语基础扎实)，又延伸至对下一代的教育影响，形成逻辑链条的纵深发展。

第二点，倡导"思维可视化"训练。通过独创的图示法，用笑脸符号标记原因，星星符号标注结果，帮助学生在构思阶段就能建立清晰的逻辑图谱。这种方法在《外国人眼中的中国》一文中得到充分体现，从移动支付便利性、社会治安、饮食文化等多角度平行展开论述，每个论点都形成完整的因果闭环。

第三点，强调文化思维的有机融合。刘老师认为优秀的英语作文应该像《中国日报》的报道那样，在逻辑严谨的同时展现文化特质。其学生作品常能自然融入太极拳、广场舞等文化元素，并运用“原因句←提示句→结果句"的特殊结构，使文章既有英语为母语人的英语逻辑的严密性，又保留东方思维的含蓄美。

这种写作体系在实践中成效显著，有学生仅用半年时间就从模板写作提升到能撰写逻辑严密的千字论述文。正如刘老师常说的:"英语是逻辑的语言，而逻辑是跨文化的桥梁。"这或许正是其教学方法最具价值的核心所在。

以下是他写作的《师生聚会》和《外国人眼中的中国》两篇英语作文，及"思维可视化"的图解。

第一篇关于《师生聚会》的英语作文示例:

The get-together making you in pleasure November 11,20-- By B.C. LIU

All classmates except some oversea and another absentees, composed of fourteen students, joined in the fun at the dinner party, at the invitation of Mr. XU Hong-jie, on Nov. 10, 20--, in Peng Tian Ge Restaurant in Tianjin, as celebration of a joyful 43th anniversary of 7802-CLASS students' graduation from Tianjin Foreign Trade College (TFTC). Its participants were treated to have a slap-up meal with every kind of dishes imaginably eaten while sitting together chatting each other. The meal menu well includes a balance of seafood types together with a little more than 10-course delicious dishes. The party was held to help re-enjoy such a further friendly relation as 7802-CLASS everyone has set up since in 1978 when in TFTC.

Mr. XU Hong-jie made available to us and thanks him for a bill he paid for the party, and does some of us for ltaly-made red wine they provided to us.All-in-7802-CLASS get-together will be expected to no longer remain an impossible dream, that means, let's put all our efforts into making the dream come true for meeting each other in the years later. That becomes favorable for keeping 7802-CLASS classmates, everyone being present at the party or not the party, not only in pleasure but also so much well full of life in everything which, l am sure, all of classmates do all time.

第二篇关于《外国人眼中的中国》的英语作文示例:

Dear Tom, one of my friends being your classmates,

In reply to you on your e-mail days before expressing the hope that you together with you friends would stay for living in China, I write you a letter by e-mail telling you about information on foreign friends whose views are to discuss or share about to live or to be at work in China, reportedly. Its up-to-date development makes Chinese cities modernly and increasingly attractive to foreigners, economically and socially. They are interested in locally excellently-accepted custom and practice looking suitable to their desire.

They are well in the comfortably-living condition that proves convenient for them to live a life, keeps them safe physically and mentally and appears pleased by their confidence in China, where people are always friendly towards foreigners going on the really enjoyable trip to interesting and sight-seeing places at leisure time to their delight.

So pleasantly will foreign friends live in China that, seen to buy them goods as garments being good in design and quality and cheap in price, they enjoy having something delicious to eat well healthily. For these, they feel it convenient for them to pay money by Ali-pay in use of mobile-phone rather than in cash.

This helps them approach to share joy not only at keeping them convenient in daily life, but watching Chinese Square Dancing become immensely favourable with foreign friends. Taichi and Chinese GONGFU are with them, too.

Thinking about these, I|’d like you to know an on-water-sporting game is interesting to foreigners, for example, the personally-driving cruiser going on the large lake in Water Park, Tianjin, China. Their stay in China enables them to feel it safe to walk up street towards home at 2:00 in the morning, without the fear about special crime involving. With them Chinese people are friendly very genuinely. So are policemen, and they are not possibly with a foreigner who is charged with crime, of course.

All local people inclusive of you as foreigners living legally in China would buy you bicycle-sharing service that is low in price and excellent in quality. You find it convenient to a tourist who take a trip from one sightseeing place to another by high-speed train, that travels from Beijing to Guangzhou, from Shanghai to Tibet, and Nanjing to Chengdu or Guilin, etc. This is to do without having been made too much expensive in your cost.

The good time lasts days, months and years when the delicious dishes are to serve greatly excellently such as hot-pot food. Arriving at a city, you would take a taxi conveniently by mobile phone to go where you would. You are allowed to pay money, by Ali-pay app, not in cash if any, for doing some shopping locally.

Having delivered to you by express mail, goods are regarded as being good in quality, after purchase. This brings daily-life-living cost not to get increasingly expensive too much.

As they are already prepared to believe, most foreigners here would like to acquire a lot knowledge about the Chinese language to enjoy living in China, where Chinese cities are of most modern internationalization with high-store buildings here and there.

I look forward to your living in China in the coming days.

Yours Sincerely,

Bao-cai, LIU

One of your classmates being your friends

第三点展示"思维可视化"图解

4种推理法

AI总结：

1.英语逻辑思维写作文：英语逻辑思维写作文能帮助各类学生得高分，写好质量优秀的英语作文是至关重要的。

2.“看中国”英语作文：以“看中国”为题，写成英语逻辑思维作文构思新颖，创意独特的卓越文。通过不同的逻辑和思维方法,来组织和表达关于“看中国”的英语作文。

3.英语作文的四点启示：（1）写作文有话可说，没有凑字数之感觉而思考得非常深入；（2）写作之前，考生学生可以没有必要使用所谓“万能句”；（3）一些大考考生认为，此篇英语作文是好文，当作优秀范文提炼出来的“模板”使用行吗？答案是否定的，因为思想及其思维人与人是不同的；（4）此两篇英语作文向英语写作学习者分享着“逻辑思维有力臂膀，托起优秀英语写作的无限彩虹”的故事及其写作方法，也通过——英语作文《师生聚会》《外国人眼中的中国》“思维可视化”图示，AI想法——之解释，有利于帮助英语写作学习者写作出优秀英语作文。

编辑语：

《英语作文《师生聚会》《外国人眼中的中国》“思维可视化”AI咋想》一文阐述：刘宝彩的英语写作方法强调逻辑思维，通过因果逻辑构建、思维可视化训练和文化思维融合，帮助学生摆脱模板化写作，写出逻辑严密的英语作文。

1. 逻辑思维构建：刘宝彩提出“四维逻辑框架”，包括一因一果、一因多果、多因一果、多因多果，帮助学生建立立体的因果逻辑。

2. 思维可视化训练：独创图示法，用笑脸符号标记原因，星星符号标注结果，帮助学生构思阶段建立清晰逻辑图谱。

3. 文化思维融合：强调英语作文应展现文化特质，自然融入太极拳、广场舞等文化元素，使文章既有英语的严密性，又保留东方的含蓄美。

写篇“师生聚会”英语作文 为高考生大学生写英语作文提供有益参考

文/刘宝彩/天津

请看以下的《Thoughts to have about the teacher-student party》（师生聚会之感想）和《The get-together making you in pleasure》（令人高兴的聚会）的同一内容聚会话题的两种方式写英文作文，如此写出不同的英语作文。

之所以不同是因为英语写作依据英语逻辑不同思维及其方法而完成写作，这样需要对逻辑思维方法作专门的训练，而应用于逻辑思维系列组合技巧的英语写作之中，借此看出学生从理论到实践写作的可行性。

一般来说，一个原因推出一个结果。实际上，仅一个提示点也可以找到含两个以上原因句及其对应的结果句：一个原因可以推出多个结果和一个结果可能源于多个原因，所以存在“一因多果”和“多因一果”两种逻辑思维形式。这样可以多元化地开拓思路、多元化地阐述观点。

第一种方式写作的《Thoughts to have about the teacher-student party》（师生聚会之感想）的英语作文。

November 11, 2023

By B.C. LIU

“So much effectively English taught teacher Wang to us that we now have an extremely solid foundation for knowledge in use throughout our life, as has turned once again favorable to our children.” said to 7802-Class teacher WANG by one of his students at the party.

The party was to give by one of classmates called Mr. XU, through arrangements made by a classmate called Mr. ZHANG and Mr. YI , at 18:30 on Nov. 10, 2023 in Peng Tian Ge restaurant located at the place near between Weijin NanLu and BinShuiXi Dao, Nankai District, Tianjin.

At the door of Peng Tian Ge restaurant appeared teacher WANG together with his wife teacher Lady CHEN who got an enthusiastic welcome on their entry to the Room, shining with their happiness and virtuousness.

The welcome was extended to them by every student’s shaking them by hand warmly. The students, whose teacher Wang at age of seventy-four is advanced in years, had endless talk to him as well as his wife. Its topics are interesting to everyone who are made in pleasure. They vary from daily life to day-to-day work, beginning with a brief introduction to teacher WANG of the personal information on his students by each of them.

We students are all really proud of teacher WANG who, as has been known to us all, are frequently delivering professionally-educated lectures that are interesting to us. This finds us inspired for renewing actually to meet each other’s requirements on practice together with theory based on teacher Wang's, currently speaking.

As shown by the requirement, English helps its learners each of student keep their minds really brilliant. This brings everyone well in everything which, I sincerely hope, 7802-class classmates do excellently nowadays and/or days to come nearly.

This time sees that Wechat called “7802-Tianjin” Group should be regarded as being home which looks altogether charming, to the delight of the classmates who are living in or outside China. That enables them to develop a close friendship, by learning each other’s strong points, I’d like to say here.

第二种方式写作的《The get-together making you in pleasure》（令人高兴的聚会）的英语作文。

November 11, 2023

By B.C. LIU

All classmates except some oversea and another absentees, composed of fourteen students, joined in the fun at the dinner party, at the invitation of Mr. XU Hong-jie , on Nov. 10, 2023, in Peng Tian Ge Restaurant in Tianjin, as celebration of a joyful 43th anniversary of 7802-CLASS students’ graduation from Tianjin Foreign Trade College (TFTC).

Its participants were treated to have a slap-up meal with every kind of dishes imaginably eaten while sitting together chatting each other. The meal menu well includes a balance of seafood types together with a little more than 10-course delicious dishes.

The party was held to help re-enjoy such a further friendly relation that 7802-CLASS everyone has set up since in 1978 when in TFTC. Their pleasures today will be inspired to grow up in eyes of the all-in-7802's classmates, brought to them today so enormously that they could find all happy in some time during many years to come yet.

The chat-related subjects are to deal with nice health, trip, and something interesting to talk to each other, with classmates, i.e. their families concerned about their parents or their children whom to be either given or taken in marriage, or about their grandchild(ren), of course, together with private investment or wealth management, or business doing successfully, still.

A friendly chat with each other is believed to learn their strong points, benefiting mentally from the dinner party to them. These are considered as being valuable to most classmates perhaps in their lives each day, I guess. That encourages everyone in the dinner party, indeed, to think it worthy of spending an excellent chatting in a little more 3-hour time that day.

As seen from this, the party could turn us back to the year in 1978, that goes by 45 years, enabling classmates to be highly delighted at seeing us each other all again the day. We, classmates, have really been extremely pleasant to each other by no means of something financial or physical to estimate actually. The value of something similar to this appears not important to us, but the get-together pleasure it has given us to have. That's what the party means greatly.

Its participants today would like you to know how much each of us appreciates the good time Mr. XU Hong-jie made available to us and thanks him for a bill he paid for the party, and does some of us for Italy-made red wine they provided to us.

All-in-7802-CLASS get-together will be expected to no longer remain an impossible dream, that means, let's put all our efforts into making the dream come true in the years later.

That becomes favorable for keeping 7802-CLASS classmates, everyone being present at the party or not the party, not only in pleasure but also so much well full of life in everything which, I am sure, you my classmates do all time.

两篇英语作文（《师生聚会之感想》《令人高兴的聚会》）大意中文

“王老师教我们同学英语非常严格、效果好，为大家工作打下了坚实的基础，甚至大家把英语又再一次传承给自己的孩子”，这是同学们在2023年11月10日18:30时在--区滨水道和卫津南路--鹏天阁酒楼，聚会时的共同的心声。

此次聚会是由许先生主办张、张先生和伊先生组织；出席聚会的同学们迎来了满面红光年74岁的可敬的王老师及其夫人陈老师，向老师们一一握手。见到老师们有说不尽的话，首先向王老师自我介绍近况如生活或工作，各自曾从事的工作所取得成就；这期间师生思绪不由得回到43年前7802外贸英语班师生情怀。

7802班同学工作成绩与王老师对同学们付出兢兢业业严格教学、对同学负责任分不开的，令同学们可敬可爱的老师这种真情，让同学难以忘怀深深打动着每一位同学。老师出席聚会让大家在心里既年青又高兴。令同学们更高兴的是，再现王老师给大家上课，所以我们为有这样的老师感到自豪和光荣----跟王老师学会了英语，我们感到“世界更大了”祝福王老师一切顺利身体健康。

这种高兴是在许洪杰、张善周先生、伊保华先生组织和安排下得到的，对此致以谢意。7802班部分同学此次聚会，特别是一些未能参加聚会的同学，相信，看后此相册后同样倍增友谊，以至于视“7802天津”微信群为“家”，希望这个“家”随着大家年龄增加而更具魅力。

总结：

写篇“师生聚会”英语作文 为高考生大学生写英语作文提供有益参考。两篇英语作文写作方法，一般来说，一个原因推出一个结果。实际上，仅一个提示点也可以找到含两个以上原因句及其对应的结果句：一个原因可以推出多个结果和一个结果可能源于多个原因，所以存在“一因多果”和“多因一果”两种逻辑思维形式。这样可以多元化地开拓思路、多元化地阐述观点，所以用“多因多果”如下图示说明：由上下箭头线表示的一个提示点（线），顺时针转动或逆时针转动，可对应找到或原因或结果，所以转动次数越多，找到原因或结果个数就越多，当然，借助这个思路图的形式，找到原因或结果，只是教英语写作学习者学习英语写作方法上的需要。为了区分原因和结果，使用“笑脸”表示原因，使用“星星”表示结果。

此图为英语写作使用“多因多果”图示。

编辑语：

写篇“师生聚会”英语作文 为高考生大学生写英语作文提供有益参考

本文介绍了一次师生聚会的情况，学生们和他们的老师进行了愉快的交流。老师通过聚会分享了新的知识和经验，同时学生们也表达了对老师感激之情。学生们在讨论中提出了很多有趣的问题，老师也给予了详细的。这次聚会让学生们受益匪浅，为他们未来的学习和生活打下了坚实的基础。