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Writing an essay in English can be a challenging but rewarding task. To ensure that your essay is effective and well-received, here are some key points to consider:
1. "Understand the Prompt": Before you start writing, make sure you fully understand the prompt or the topic of the essay. Clarify any ambiguities and make sure you know what is expected of you.
2. "Plan Your Essay": Outline your essay to organize your thoughts. A typical essay structure includes an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Decide on the main points you want to cover in each section.
3. "Cohesion and Coherence": Your essay should flow logically from one idea to the next. Use transitional words and phrases to connect your ideas and make the essay easy to follow.
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6. "Paragraph Structure": Each paragraph should have a clear main idea and should be supported by relevant details and examples. Start each paragraph with a topic sentence that introduces the main idea.
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写人记事类 (涵盖话题：个人情况；家庭、朋友与周围的人)

A

假如你是李华，下个月你将参加赴英留学活动。 在开营仪式上，为了让营员们相互了解，领队老师要 求同学们用英语轮流作自我介绍。请你写一篇短文 介绍你自己，为发言做准备。

内容包括：1. 简要介绍自己(性格、爱好)；

2. 谈谈自己的理想；

3. 说说自己的交友观。

要求：1. 内容要全面，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；

2. 词数不少于100，发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Hello, everyone. I'm very glad to have the chance to introduce myself to you.

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That's all. Thanks for your listening!

B

初中三年的学习生活中，你一定有很多想要感谢的老师。今天的英语口语课分享“你与恩师之间的故事”，请把你对恩师的那份感恩大胆说出来吧！

内容包括：1. 你对他 / 她的印象；

2. 分享你与恩师之间的故事(如他 / 她是怎么帮助你的)；

3. 表达你对他 / 她的祝福。

要求：1. 内容要全面，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；

2. 词数不少于100，格式和开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear ______,

I want to express my thanks to you.

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Yours,

Li Hua

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A

Hello, everyone. I'm very glad to have the chance to introduce myself to you. My name is Li Hua. I'm an active and warm-hearted boy. I have many hobbies, such as reading, traveling, playing football and listening to music. Of all the hobbies, reading is my favorite because it gives me a lot of knowledge and makes me happy. It's my dream to be a writer. I know the road to making my dream come true is full of challenges, but no matter what happens, I won't give up my dream. Friends are important to me. I like making friends with those who are different from me. We maybe sometimes don't agree with each other, but from friends like this I can learn different ways of thinking.

That's all. Thanks for your listening!

B

Dear Mr. Wang,

I want to express my thanks to you. You're such a nice and responsible teacher, and you will always have a special place in my heart. You have given a lot of help to me. I can clearly remember one morning while I was copying my deskmate's English exercises, you came to me. I was so afraid that I didn't know what to do at that time. To my relief, you weren't angry with me. Instead, you told me how to do it. After class, you told me copying wasn't good for me and you said I could feel free to ask for your help whenever I had trouble learning English. With your help and encouragement, my English made progress little by little. And now I'm a top student in English. Again, thank you, Mr. Wang! And I wish you a happy life in the future!

Yours,

Li Hua

做法建议类

(涵盖话题：卫生与健康；旅游与交通)

A

假如你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Gina在微信上给你留言，向你询问保护牙齿的建议。请你根据下面的图示，用英语写一篇短文回复她的留言。

要求：1. 内容须包括图示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当发挥；

2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；

3. 词数不少于100，短文的开头和结尾已给出， 但不计入总词数。

Gina, I'd like to share with you my ideas about how to protect your teeth.

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If you follow these tips, having healthy white teeth won't be just a dream.

B

公交车给人们提供了一种低碳便利的出行方式，是许多人日常出行的重要交通工具。为了增强中学生“争做文明乘客”的意识，你校英文校刊就“如何文明乘坐公交车”面向全体九年级学生征文。请你根据下面的图片内容，用英语写一篇短文，然后投稿。

要求：1. 内容要紧扣图片；

2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；

3. 词数不少于100，短文的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

It is common for us to take buses in our daily life. But how can we be civilized (文明的) passengers while taking the buses? Let me tell you!

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In a word, let's try to be civilized bus passengers!

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A

Gina, I'd like to share with you my ideas about how to protect your teeth.

First, you should brush your teeth in the correct way. It's a good idea to brush them three times a day and spend at least three minutes each time you brush them. And remember to change your toothbrush every three months. Second, you should have good eating habits. You need to be careful about what you eat and drink. You should keep away from sweet or icy food, which does great harm to your teeth. Last but not least, you should visit the dentist at least once a year. That's because the oral examination is not only for the health of teeth, but the whole body.

If you follow these tips, having healthy white teeth won't be just a dream.

B

It is common for us to take buses in our daily life. But how can we be civilized passengers while taking the buses? Let me tell you! First, we should wait in line when we're waiting for the bus. It's rude to cut in line. And we should get on or off the bus one by one. Second, we shouldn't make noise on the bus. For example, it's impolite to talk loudly on our mobile phone. Third, on the bus we should offer our seats to those who really need them, such as the old, the sick and the weak. Fourth, we should keep the bus clean. If we eat or drink something on the bus, we should throw the rubbish in the bin. It's bad to throw it on the floor of the bus.

In a word, let's try to be civilized bus passengers!

活动计划类

(涵盖话题：日常活动；节假日活动)

A

上周末，你参加了学校组织的为期两天的乡村露 营活动。请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文记 叙此次活动，然后发布在你校的英文网站上。

乡村露营活动

目的(……)

内容(搭帐篷、欣赏山景、举办篝火晚会、……)

意义(……)

要求：1. 内容应包括提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥；

2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；

3. 词数不少于100，短文的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

参考词汇：篝火晚会 campfire party

Last weekend I went on a two-day camping trip to Da Yan Village with some teachers and students in our school.

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B

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Alex发来电子邮件 想向你了解中秋节这一中国传统节日。请你根据下图所示，给他回复一封电子邮件，介绍该节日。

要求：1. 内容应包括图示中的所有要点；

2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；

3. 词数不少于100，电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Alex, How's everything going? Now let me tell you about the Mid-Autumn Festival.

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I hope you can come to China and enjoy this festival next year.

Yours,

Li Hua

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A

Last weekend I went on a two-day camping trip to Da Yan Village with some teachers and students in our school.

Our school's English Club organized the activity to let us experience the peaceful life in the countryside and relax during the weekend. We did lots of things during the two days. We learned how to put up a tent. We enjoyed lovely mountain views and breathed fresh air. In the evening, we held a campfire party. We danced and sang around the campfire. All of us had a wonderful time. In addition, we cooked over the fire and the food we cooked tasted so delicious.

I think camping is the best way to get close to nature and enjoy its beauty. Meanwhile, we can learn certain skills and become more independent.

B

Dear Alex,

How's everything going? Now let me tell you about the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month every year.

Usually, no matter how far away or how busy people are, they will try to go home to get together with their family for the festival. At noon there is usually a big family dinner. In the evening, the whole family admire the full moon and share delicious mooncakes. Grandparents tell the story about Chang'e flying to the moon to their grandchildren. People believe that the full moon is a symbol of reunion and good luck, and they often give best wishes to each other at this special time.

I hope you can come to China and enjoy this festival next year.

Yours,

Li Hua

观点看法类

(涵盖话题：情感与情绪；人际交往)

A

英语课上，老师组织全班同学就“What is happiness?”进行了讨论，下面是你所在小组的讨论结果。假如你是李华，是你们小组的发言人，请你根据表格中的内容准备一篇发言稿，向全班同学汇报你们小组的讨论情况。

要求： 1. 内容要全面，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；

2. 词数不少于 100，发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Good morning, everybody. Let me share with you our opinions about“What is happiness?” .

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That's all. Thanks for your attention!

B

现在大多数中学生都有或多或少的压力，他们的压力有的来自学习和考试，有的来自父母过高的期望……有些人因为压力而成长，但有些人因为承受不了压力而终日抱怨。本周的英语角活动将围绕“压力”这一话题让同学们发言。请你结合自身情况，并根据下面的写作要点，用英语写一篇短文,为本次发言做准备。

写作要点：1. When do you feel stressed?

2. What do you think of stress?

3. How do you deal with stress?

要求：1. 紧扣话题，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；

2. 词数不少于100，短文的开头和结尾已给出， 但不计入总词数。

It's common to have stress in life. Different people feel stressed in different ways.

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In short, when we have stress, we shouldn't be afraid. We should use it as a tool and deal with it in our own way. If so, we'll lead a happy life.

C

礼貌是拉近自己和他人的一座桥梁，懂礼貌的人会成为一个受欢迎的人。本周五的英语写作课结束后，英语老师给你们布置了一篇作文，让你们围绕“Good manners are necessary because one is judged (判断) by his manners.”这句话写一篇英语作文。

内容包括：1. 谈谈你对这句话的理解；

2. 作为中学生，如何成为有礼貌的人(至少 三点)。

要求：1. 作文内容要紧扣这句话，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；

2. 词数不少于100，作文的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

可能用到的词汇：尊敬 respect

Good manners are necessary because one is judged by his manners.

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No 1

“天问一号”成功发射 中国首辆火星车亮相

Tianwen 1 was launched on its Mars mission carried by a Long March 5 rocket from the Wenchang Space Launch Center on July 23.7月23日，“天问一号”火星探测任务搭载长征5号火箭在文昌卫星发射中心实施。

Depending on the two planets' orbits, Mars is 55 million km to 400 million km from Earth. It is estimated it will take the probe seven months to reach Mars.火星距离地球大约5500万公里到4亿公里，按照这个距离，探测器大约要飞行7个月才能到达火星。

中国行星探测任务（planetary exploration missions）被命名为“天问（Tianwen）系列”，首次火星探测任务（first Mars exploration mission）被命名为“天问一号”，后续行星任务依次编号。“天问”来自中国伟大诗人屈原的长诗《天问》。“天问”这个名字表达了中华民族对于真理追求的坚韧与执着（the Chinese nation's perseverance in pursuing truth），体现了对自然和宇宙空间探索的文化传承（culture of exploring nature and the universe）。

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No 2

2020年政府工作报告（双语全文）

2020年5月22日，国务院总理李克强代表国务院，报告政府工作。

The covid-19 epidemic is the fastest spreading, most extensive, and most challenging public health emergency China has encountered since the founding of the People’s Republic. Under the strong leadership of the Central Committee of the Communist Party of China with Comrade Xi Jinping at its core, and through the hard work and sacrifice of our entire nation, we have made major strategic achievements in our response to covid-19. At present, the epidemic has not yet come to an end, while the tasks we face in promoting development are immense. We must redouble our efforts to minimize the losses resulting from the virus and fulfill the targets and tasks for economic and social development this year.这次新冠肺炎疫情，是新中国成立以来我国遭遇的传播速度最快、感染范围最广、防控难度最大的重大突发公共卫生事件。在以习近平同志为核心的党中央坚强领导下，经过全国上下和广大人民群众艰苦卓绝努力并付出牺牲，疫情防控取得重大战略成果。当前，疫情尚未结束，发展任务异常艰巨。要努力把疫情造成的损失降到最低，努力完成今年经济社会发展目标任务。

No 3

蚊子会传播新冠病毒吗？专家是这么说的……

Mosquito season is upon us, and considering that these bloodsuckers are known to transmit diseases, people are concerned: Do mosquitoes carry the coronavirus? And if so, can they transmit it to humans and infect a person with COVID-19?又到蚊子季了，想到这些吸血昆虫会传播疾病，人们感到担忧：蚊子会携带新冠病毒吗？如果可以，它们会不会把新冠病毒传播给人类，让人感染上新冠肺炎？

Short answer: it's unlikely. Official guidance from the World Health Organization (WHO) says there’s no information or evidence to suggest that the new coronavirus could be transmitted through mosquito bites.简单来说，答案是：不太可能。世界卫生组织的官方指南称，没有信息或证据显示，新冠病毒会通过蚊虫叮咬来传播。

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No 4

《抗击新冠肺炎疫情的中国行动》白皮书（双语全文）

国务院新闻办公室6月7日发布《抗击新冠肺炎疫情的中国行动》白皮书。

To keep a record of China’s efforts in its own fight against the virus, to share its experience with the rest of the world, and to clarify its ideas on the global battle, the Chinese government now releases this white paper.为记录中国人民抗击疫情的伟大历程，与国际社会分享中国抗疫的经验做法，阐明全球抗疫的中国理念、中国主张，中国政府特发布此白皮书。

No 5

经合组织报告：中国将是2020年G20唯一实现正增长的国家

China is the only G20 country for which output is projected to rise in 2020, with its economy growing 1.8%, compared to a 3.8% contraction in the United States and a 7.9% decline among the 19 countries that use the euro. Beijing reported Tuesday that retail sales were higher in August than they had been the previous year — the first time sales have increased in 2020.

在二十国集团中，经合组织预计只有中国的2020年经济产出将增长，预期经济增长率为1.8%，相比之下，美国经济预期将下滑3.8%，19个欧元区国家将下滑7.9%。根据中国政府9月15日发布的报告，中国8月份零售业销售额高于去年同期，这是2020年零售额首次出现增长。

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No 6

一课译词：心惊胆战

“心惊胆战”，汉语成语，字面意思是“heart startling and gallbladder trembling”，形容十分害怕。与英文短语“strike terror into (one's) heart”意思相近，表示“to frighten, terrify, or horrify someone”。

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No 7

西藏历史性消除绝对贫困

Tibet Autonomous Region has accomplished the historical feat of eradicating absolute poverty, according to a press briefing held in the regional capital of Lhasa Thursday. By the end of 2019, Tibet had lifted 628,000 people out of poverty and delisted 74 county-level areas from the poverty list, said Wu Yingjie, Communist Party of China chief of Tibet.西藏自治区委员会书记吴英杰在发布会上表示，截至2019年底，西藏74个贫困县全部摘帽，62.8万建档立卡贫困人口全部脱贫，历史性消除绝对贫困。

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No 8

一课译词：风调雨顺

“风调雨顺”，汉语成语，字面意思是“seasonable weather with gentle breeze and timely rain”，形容风雨适合农作物生长（good weather for the crops），亦可喻指天下安宁，常与“国泰民安”一起出现。

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No 9

IMF：中国将是主要经济体中今年唯一正增长国家

The global economy is now projected to contract by 4.4% in 2020 — an upward revision from an estimate of -4.9% made in June (which has now also been revised to -5.2% due to a new methodology used by the IMF). The IMF’s forecast assumes that social distancing due to the coronavirus pandemic will continue into 2021, and that local transmission will fall everywhere by the end of 2022.

根据国际货币基金组织的预测，全球经济在2020年将萎缩4.4%，高于6月份下降4.9%的预测（由于国际货币基金组织采用新方法，该数据被修正为下降5.2%)。国际货币基金组织的预测认为，新冠疫情造成的社交隔离措施将持续到2021年，到2022年年底，全球各地的社区传播都将减少。

Among major economies, only China is expected to expand in 2020. The IMF believes the country, which battled Covid-19 earlier than the rest of the world and was quickly able to move out of lockdown due to strict containment measures, will grow by 1.9%.

在主要经济体中，只有中国有望在2020年实现经济增长。国际货币基金组织预计今年中国经济增长将达到1.9%。中国比世界其他国家更早抗击新冠肺炎疫情，由于采取了严格的管控措施，迅速走出了封锁状态。

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No 10

为减少疫情损失 纽约餐馆加收10%“疫情恢复费”

New York City diners may soon see a Covid-19 surcharge on their bills as the restaurant industry continues to hobble due to the coronavirus pandemic.由于新冠疫情，餐饮业的处境仍然艰难，纽约市的食客们可能很快就会在账单上看到“疫情恢复费”。

The New York City Council passed a bill on Wednesday 46-2 that would allow restaurants to charge as much as 10% on customers dining indoors or outdoors to help cover Covid-19 expenses.纽约市议会9月16日以46票赞成、2票反对通过了一项法案，允许餐馆向在室内或室外就餐的顾客收取最高10%的费用，以应对新冠疫情的打击。

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