手把手教你写《在毕业会上的讲话》,(精选5篇)
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在毕业会上的讲话作文,是毕业生们表达对母校、老师和同学感激之情的重要方式。以下是一些在撰写毕业会讲话作文时应注意的事项:
1. 主题明确:讲话作文的主题应围绕毕业、感恩、成长、未来等方面展开,表达自己对母校、老师、同学的感激之情。
2. 结构清晰:一篇好的讲话作文应具备明确的开头、中间和结尾。开头部分可以简要介绍自己的基本情况,中间部分重点阐述感恩之情,结尾部分可以展望未来,表达对母校、老师和同学的祝福。
3. 语言真挚:讲话作文的语言要真挚感人,避免使用空洞、虚假的词汇。可以用具体的事例、感受来支撑自己的观点,使文章更具说服力。
4. 适当引用:在作文中适当引用名人名言、诗词、典故等,可以丰富文章内容,提升讲话的档次。
5. 体现个人特色:在表达感激之情的同时,要展现自己的个性,让听众感受到你的独特魅力。
6. 注意篇幅:毕业会讲话作文的篇幅不宜过长,一般控制在500-800字为宜。在保证内容完整的前提下,力求简洁明了。
7. 格式规范:遵循学校或活动组织者的要求,规范作文格式,如字体、字号、行距等。
8. 适时调整:在写作过程中,要适时调整文章结构、语言表达,确保文章通顺、流畅。
9. 重视审稿:在完成初稿
毕业生代表徐艺凌在港中大(深圳)2025年本科生毕业典礼上的发言
香港中文大学(深圳)2025年本科生毕业典礼上,毕业生代表——来自学勤书院、经管学院的徐艺凌以个人成长故事为主线,分享了大学四年收获的三点感悟:发现热爱、认清边界、遇见同行者。她深切感恩师长亲友的培育与陪伴,并勉励全体毕业生保持包容与温暖,带着温柔与坚韧,以更开阔的姿态拥抱世界。
毕业生代表徐艺凌的发言
尊敬的查逸超教授,卢煜明教授,徐扬生校长,各位老师,各位来宾,亲爱的家长朋友们,2025届毕业生们:大家早上好!我是来自学勤书院、经管学院的徐艺凌。我谨代表2025届全体毕业生,向各位致以最热烈的欢迎,感谢大家与我们共同庆祝这个意义非凡的时刻。
小时候,妈妈经常跟我讲她上学的故事。她出生在江西省的一个偏远小村庄,是家里五个孩子中最小的一个。跟姐姐们一样,家里没打算让她读书。但她没有认命,凭着一股不服输的劲,为自己争取到了读书的机会,成为了家里第一个大学生。毕业后,她来到了东莞,我就在这出生长大。
是教育的力量,让妈妈从江西山村走到如今的新一线城市东莞;也正是教育的力量,让我从东莞来到深圳,感受大都市的活力。在毕业之际,我想分享我在漫漫求学路上的三点收获,尤其是在港中大(深圳)的四年,更让我受益良多。
首先,我找到了热爱。亚里士多德曾说,幸福是人生的终极目标——我深以为然。但幸福的模样千人千面,对我而言,幸福来自我称之为“人生组合”的探索,包括咨询工作、公益实践以及戏剧生活。就像投资组合一样,“人生组合”帮助我分散风险,也拓宽了幸福的来源。那我是如何构建这个组合的呢?答案是无惧失败,不断尝试,沉淀反思,再次出发。大一那年,我到江西参加了为期两周的支教项目。但项目结束后我发现两周时间太过短暂,难以真正的改变当地的教育环境。这份遗憾促使我寻找更可持续投身公益的方式。于是,我加入了一个为NGO公益组织提供咨询服务的社会企业,帮助公益组织提升自身能力,以授人以渔的方式助人。正是这段经历,让我发现了对咨询工作的热爱。之后的实习经历帮助我在快消品和医疗健康领域积累了实践经验,也让我更坚定了这份热爱。与此同时,我从未放下对表演的兴趣。我加入了学勤书院的莱恩戏剧社,作为一名演员走上了舞台。无论是破解商业难题、投身社会公益,还是站在聚光灯下演绎角色,我都找到了心之所向。这份自由探索的勇气与追逐热爱的底气,正是港中大(深圳)赠予我最珍贵的礼物。
第二点收获是,我学会了认清边界。向内审视,边界能助我明晰自身优劣;向外求索,边界为我指明了突破的方向。我自小便知道沟通是我的天赋,各类演讲比赛的奖杯便是最好的证明。在素有“龙岗演讲大学”之称的港中大(深圳),我进一步打磨了这项能力,如今已能在一分钟内完成有说服力的展示。也正因如此,毕业后我选择成为海外市场的战略规划经理,将所学应用于真实的商业挑战中。港中大(深圳)同样教会我挑战外部的界限。当我们去年筹备话剧《On Her Own》时,没有人相信它会成功。我们的导演团队经验较少,而我自己也是初涉舞台。然而,凭借着数月如一日的共同打磨与刻苦排练,去年十二月,我们成功地为两百名观众献上了一场精彩的演出,更在今年三月受邀至清华大学深圳国际研究生院再度献演。在我看来,每一次拒绝,每一次低估,每一个摆在我面前的障碍,都是激励我再次出发的起点,而非无法逾越的高墙。
最后一点收获是,我遇见了我的同行者。在港中大(深圳),我结交了许多推心置腹的挚友。他们激励我前行,鞭策我成长,也始终是我最坚实的后盾。一路走来,我开始思考:何不尝试开创一番属于自己的事业,如一家融合商业、公益与创意的公司?这还只是个想法,但幸运的是,我的身边已有一群在投行、科技、艺术等领域深耕的朋友,我已经知道我的创业合伙人在哪了。
徐艺凌分享了大学四年收获的三点感悟:发现热爱、认清边界、遇见同行者
这便是我在港中大(深圳)四年时光里,沉淀下来的三点体悟:追逐热爱,认清边界,结伴同行。现在,请允许我用中文来表达我们在这个特殊日子里最诚挚的感谢。
用四年的时光,我找到了热爱、认清了边界、也遇见了同行者。这样的故事不仅属于我,也属于在场的每一位毕业生。
一路走来,我们接受了太多的帮助与惠泽——父母雷打不动的问候,教授温润如春风的分享,朋友在失意时的陪伴,学长姐的悉心传授,让我们从跌跌撞撞的新生,成长为今天能独当一面的毕业生。这些情义不该被忘记,也不能被忘记,我们要永远记得把别人给我们的光,继续传递下去。
同学们,毕业不是学习的终点,而是以更开阔的姿态拥抱世界的起点。愿我们始终铭记徐扬生校长的叮嘱——“坚毅一点,超脱一点,往前走,慢慢走,不要停”,像神仙湖畔的碧波一样包容,像书院的夜灯一样温暖。纵有狂风拔地起,亦当乘风破万里!2025届的伙伴们,请带着母校赋予的温柔与坚韧,去点亮更广阔的天空吧!
毕业快乐,祝福大家!
Professor Chai, Professor Lo, President Xu, respected faculty, distinguished guests, proud families, and above all, fellow graduates, good morning! I am XU Yiling, from Diligentia College, School of Management and Economics. On behalf of the graduating Class of 2025, I’d like to welcome everyone and thank you for celebrating this special moment with us.
When I was a child, my mom often told me her story of going to school. She was born in a small village in Jiangxi Province, the youngest of five children in a farming family. As you may tell, she was denied going to school, just like her elder sisters. But she challenged every “no” in her way of receiving education. Eventually, she became the first university student in the family. After graduation, she moved to Dongguan, where I was born and raised.
It was education that brought my mom to Dongguan, now regarded as the new first-tier city, and it was also education that brought me to Shenzhen to experience the vibrance of a metropolis. Standing at the point of our graduation, I want to share three things I have learned in my education journey, especially the four years at CUHK-Shenzhen.
First, I discovered my passion. Aristotle said that happiness is the ultimate goal of human life—and I couldn’t agree more. But happiness has different meanings for different people. For me, I found mine by exploring what I call my “life portfolio”—a combination of consulting, public good, and drama. Like an investment portfolio, life portfolios hedge the risk and give me more sources of happiness. How did I build this portfolio? Through trying, failing, reflecting, and trying again. When I was a freshman, I joined a two-week volunteer teaching program back in Jiangxi. After the program, I realized that two weeks wasn’t enough to make a change, which pushed me to find more sustainable ways to give back. I joined a consulting organization to support NGOs, helping them build long-term capability rather than quick fixes. Through this journey, I also discovered my passion for consulting. Internships later deepened this passion, giving me hands-on experience in consumer goods and healthcare. At the same time, I never gave up on my interest in being an actress. I joined the Lion Drama Club of Diligentia College and stepped into the world of acting. Whether it’s solving business problems, promoting social good, or performing under the spotlight, I have found my passions. This freedom to explore and the courage to pursue is the greatest gift CUHK-Shenzhen has given me.
Student representative Yiling XU delivers a speech at the Graduation Ceremony, on May 18th
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Second, I learned to understand boundaries. Knowing the boundary internally helps me identify strengths and weaknesses while knowing the boundaries set by others lets me know the direction to break through. From a young age, I knew communication was my strength, as I could always win a prize in a speech contest. At CUHK-Shenzhen, also known as “Longgang Presentation University,” I polished this strength, and can now deliver a persuasive pitch in just one minute. That’s why I chose to become a Strategy Planning Manager in the overseas market after graduation to apply my skills to real-world challenges. CUHK-Shenzhen also taught me to challenge external boundaries. When we staged our drama On Her Own, no one believed it would succeed. Our directing team had little experience, and I was acting for the first time. But through months of co-creation and rehearsals, we performed for 200 people last December and were later invited to Tsinghua Shenzhen International Graduate School to perform again this March. I treat every rejection, every underestimation, and every boundary placed in front of me not as walls but as starting lines.
Finally, I found my people. At CUHK-Shenzhen, I made friends that I trust deeply—people who inspire me, challenge me, and support me. Along the way, I also started thinking: what if one day I build something of my own? A company that combines my interests in business, social good, and creativity. It’s still a dream, but the good news is, with friends in investment banking, tech, and arts, I already know who to call (assuming they survive in 996).
So these are the three lessons I have learned at CUHK-Shenzhen: Discover your passion, know your boundaries, and find your people. Now, please allow me to switch to Chinese to express our gratitude on this special day.
Over these four years, I have discovered my passion, understood my boundaries, and found my people. This story is not just mine; it belongs to every graduate sitting here today.
Along the way, we have received so much help and kindness: parents’ unwavering daily greetings, professors’ inspiring insights, friends who stood by us during tough times, and seniors who generously passed on their wisdom. These have shaped us from stumbling freshmen into graduates ready to stand on our own today. Such bonds of care should neither be forgotten nor can they be—we must always remember to pass on the light that others have shone on us.
Fellow students, graduation is not the end of learning, but the beginning of embracing the world with an even more open mind. May we always remember President Yangsheng Xu’s advice: “Be more resilient, more detached. Keep walking forward, walk slowly, but never stop.” Let us be as inclusive as the rippling waters of Fairy Lake, as warm as the lights that glow late in our colleges. Even if fierce winds rise around us, may we ride the storm and soar across a thousand miles. To the Class of 2025, let us carry with the tenderness and strength our university has given us, and go light up a wider sky!
Happy graduation, and best wishes to everyone!
来源:港中大(深圳)
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感恩相伴,逐梦远航
尊敬的老师、亲爱的同学们:大家好!我是,很荣幸能在这充满离别与希望的毕业典礼上,作为学生代表发言。时光匆匆,如白驹过隙,仿佛昨日我们才怀揣着憧憬与好奇踏入校园,而今天,却要带着满满的收获与不舍,与这熟悉的一切告别。校园里的每一寸土地,都印刻着我们的足迹;每一间教室,都回荡着我们的欢声笑语;每一张课桌,都见证了我们的奋斗与成长。还记得刚入学时,我们青涩懵懂,对未来充满了无限的遐想。课堂上,我们睁大好奇的眼睛,认真聆听老师的教诲,在知识的海洋里尽情遨游。从简单的拼音字母到优美的诗词歌赋,从基础的加减乘除到复杂的几何函数,我们一步一个脚印,不断积累,不断进步。那些为了解开一道难题而冥思苦想的夜晚,那些为了背诵一篇课文而反复诵读的清晨,都成为了我们成长路上最珍贵的回忆。运动会上,我们挥洒汗水,为了班级的荣誉奋力拼搏。短跑赛道上,运动员们如离弦之箭,风驰电掣般冲向终点;长跑比赛中,他们咬紧牙关,坚持到底,用顽强的毅力诠释着坚持的意义。看台上,同学们的加油声、欢呼声此起彼伏,那震耳欲聋的声音仿佛还在耳边回荡。那一刻,我们明白了团结的力量,懂得了为集体荣誉而战的责任。艺术节里,我们绽放光彩,用歌声、舞蹈和画笔展现着自己的才华。舞台上,同学们载歌载舞,用灵动的身姿和美妙的歌声表达着对生活的热爱;画室中,大家挥毫泼墨,用绚丽的色彩描绘着心中的梦想。每一个节目、每一幅作品,都凝聚着我们的心血和努力,也让我们感受到了艺术的魅力和创造的快乐。然而,在我们成长的道路上,最离不开的是老师们的辛勤付出和悉心教导。是你们,用渊博的知识为我们打开了智慧的大门;是你们,用耐心的引导让我们在迷茫中找到方向;是你们,用无私的关爱温暖着我们的心灵。当我们遇到困难时,你们总是第一时间伸出援手,给予我们鼓励和支持;当我们取得成绩时,你们又及时提醒我们要戒骄戒躁,继续努力。你们就像一盏盏明灯,照亮了我们前行的道路;你们就像一位位园丁,精心呵护着我们这些幼苗茁壮成长。在这里,我想代表全体同学,向辛勤耕耘的老师们道一声:“老师,您辛苦了!谢谢您!”同时,我也要感谢我的同学们。是你们,在我快乐时与我分享喜悦,在我悲伤时给我安慰和鼓励;是你们,陪我度过了无数个难忘的时光,让我感受到了友情的珍贵。我们一起在操场上嬉笑玩耍,一起在教室里讨论问题,一起为了梦想而努力奋斗。那些一起奋斗的日子,那些相互扶持的瞬间,都将永远铭刻在我的心中。虽然我们即将各奔东西,但我相信,无论我们走到哪里,这份纯真的友谊都不会褪色。毕业,是一段旅程的结束,更是新征程的开始。我们即将告别熟悉的校园,告别朝夕相处的老师和同学,踏上人生新的征程。未来的道路或许会充满挑战和困难,但我相信,只要我们怀揣着梦想,勇敢前行,就一定能够战胜一切。我们要像雄鹰一样,搏击长空,追逐属于自己的那片蓝天;我们要像骏马一样,驰骋疆场,书写属于自己的辉煌篇章。最后,让我们再次向老师们致以最崇高的敬意和最衷心的感谢!祝愿老师们身体健康,工作顺利!祝愿同学们前程似锦,梦想成真!祝愿我们的母校蒸蒸日上,桃李满天下!谢谢大家!