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Writing an English essay requires attention to several key aspects to ensure clarity, coherence, and effectiveness. Here are some important points to consider:
1. "Understand the Prompt or Topic:" - Make sure you fully understand the essay prompt or the topic you are supposed to write about. - If there are specific requirements or guidelines, such as word count or format, adhere to them.
2. "Thesis Statement:" - Develop a clear and concise thesis statement that will guide the rest of your essay. - The thesis should reflect the main point or argument you will be making.
3. "Structure:" - Organize your essay with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. - The introduction should introduce the topic and your thesis statement. - The body paragraphs should support your thesis with evidence, examples, and explanations. - The conclusion should summarize your main points and reinforce your thesis.
4. "Grammar and Vocabulary:" - Use correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling. - Employ a varied vocabulary to enhance the readability and sophistication of your writing. - Avoid slang, colloquialisms, and overly complex language unless appropriate for the context.
5. "Cohesion and Coherence:" - Ensure that your paragraphs are cohesive, meaning they are logically connected. - Use transitional words and phrases to help readers follow your argument or narrative.
6. "Evidence and Examples:" - Support your points
话题作文分类训练
写人记事类 (涵盖话题:个人情况;家庭、朋友与周围的人)
A
假如你是李华,下个月你将参加赴英留学活动。 在开营仪式上,为了让营员们相互了解,领队老师要 求同学们用英语轮流作自我介绍。请你写一篇短文 介绍你自己,为发言做准备。
内容包括:1. 简要介绍自己(性格、爱好);
2. 谈谈自己的理想;
3. 说说自己的交友观。
要求:1. 内容要全面,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;
2. 词数不少于100,发言稿的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I'm very glad to have the chance to introduce myself to you.
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That's all. Thanks for your listening!
B
初中三年的学习生活中,你一定有很多想要感谢的老师。今天的英语口语课分享“你与恩师之间的故事”,请把你对恩师的那份感恩大胆说出来吧!
内容包括:1. 你对他 / 她的印象;
2. 分享你与恩师之间的故事(如他 / 她是怎么帮助你的);
3. 表达你对他 / 她的祝福。
要求:1. 内容要全面,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;
2. 词数不少于100,格式和开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear ______,
I want to express my thanks to you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
优秀范文:
A
Hello, everyone. I'm very glad to have the chance to introduce myself to you. My name is Li Hua. I'm an active and warm-hearted boy. I have many hobbies, such as reading, traveling, playing football and listening to music. Of all the hobbies, reading is my favorite because it gives me a lot of knowledge and makes me happy. It's my dream to be a writer. I know the road to making my dream come true is full of challenges, but no matter what happens, I won't give up my dream. Friends are important to me. I like making friends with those who are different from me. We maybe sometimes don't agree with each other, but from friends like this I can learn different ways of thinking.
That's all. Thanks for your listening!
B
Dear Mr. Wang,
I want to express my thanks to you. You're such a nice and responsible teacher, and you will always have a special place in my heart. You have given a lot of help to me. I can clearly remember one morning while I was copying my deskmate's English exercises, you came to me. I was so afraid that I didn't know what to do at that time. To my relief, you weren't angry with me. Instead, you told me how to do it. After class, you told me copying wasn't good for me and you said I could feel free to ask for your help whenever I had trouble learning English. With your help and encouragement, my English made progress little by little. And now I'm a top student in English. Again, thank you, Mr. Wang! And I wish you a happy life in the future!
Yours,
Li Hua
做法建议类
(涵盖话题:卫生与健康;旅游与交通)
A
假如你是李华,你的加拿大笔友Gina在微信上给你留言,向你询问保护牙齿的建议。请你根据下面的图示,用英语写一篇短文回复她的留言。
要求:1. 内容须包括图示中的两个要点和一个补充要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;
3. 词数不少于100,短文的开头和结尾已给出, 但不计入总词数。
Gina, I'd like to share with you my ideas about how to protect your teeth.
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If you follow these tips, having healthy white teeth won't be just a dream.
B
公交车给人们提供了一种低碳便利的出行方式,是许多人日常出行的重要交通工具。为了增强中学生“争做文明乘客”的意识,你校英文校刊就“如何文明乘坐公交车”面向全体九年级学生征文。请你根据下面的图片内容,用英语写一篇短文,然后投稿。
要求:1. 内容要紧扣图片;
2. 语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;
3. 词数不少于100,短文的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
It is common for us to take buses in our daily life. But how can we be civilized (文明的) passengers while taking the buses? Let me tell you!
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In a word, let's try to be civilized bus passengers!
优秀范文:
A
Gina, I'd like to share with you my ideas about how to protect your teeth.
First, you should brush your teeth in the correct way. It's a good idea to brush them three times a day and spend at least three minutes each time you brush them. And remember to change your toothbrush every three months. Second, you should have good eating habits. You need to be careful about what you eat and drink. You should keep away from sweet or icy food, which does great harm to your teeth. Last but not least, you should visit the dentist at least once a year. That's because the oral examination is not only for the health of teeth, but the whole body.
If you follow these tips, having healthy white teeth won't be just a dream.
B
It is common for us to take buses in our daily life. But how can we be civilized passengers while taking the buses? Let me tell you! First, we should wait in line when we're waiting for the bus. It's rude to cut in line. And we should get on or off the bus one by one. Second, we shouldn't make noise on the bus. For example, it's impolite to talk loudly on our mobile phone. Third, on the bus we should offer our seats to those who really need them, such as the old, the sick and the weak. Fourth, we should keep the bus clean. If we eat or drink something on the bus, we should throw the rubbish in the bin. It's bad to throw it on the floor of the bus.
In a word, let's try to be civilized bus passengers!
活动计划类
(涵盖话题:日常活动;节假日活动)
A
上周末,你参加了学校组织的为期两天的乡村露 营活动。请你根据下面的提示,用英语写一篇短文记 叙此次活动,然后发布在你校的英文网站上。
乡村露营活动
目的(……)
内容(搭帐篷、欣赏山景、举办篝火晚会、……)
意义(……)
要求:1. 内容应包括提示中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;
3. 词数不少于100,短文的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:篝火晚会 campfire party
Last weekend I went on a two-day camping trip to Da Yan Village with some teachers and students in our school.
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B
假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Alex发来电子邮件 想向你了解中秋节这一中国传统节日。请你根据下图所示,给他回复一封电子邮件,介绍该节日。
要求:1. 内容应包括图示中的所有要点;
2. 语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;
3. 词数不少于100,电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Alex, How's everything going? Now let me tell you about the Mid-Autumn Festival.
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I hope you can come to China and enjoy this festival next year.
Yours,
Li Hua
优秀范文:
A
Last weekend I went on a two-day camping trip to Da Yan Village with some teachers and students in our school.
Our school's English Club organized the activity to let us experience the peaceful life in the countryside and relax during the weekend. We did lots of things during the two days. We learned how to put up a tent. We enjoyed lovely mountain views and breathed fresh air. In the evening, we held a campfire party. We danced and sang around the campfire. All of us had a wonderful time. In addition, we cooked over the fire and the food we cooked tasted so delicious.
I think camping is the best way to get close to nature and enjoy its beauty. Meanwhile, we can learn certain skills and become more independent.
B
Dear Alex,
How's everything going? Now let me tell you about the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month every year.
Usually, no matter how far away or how busy people are, they will try to go home to get together with their family for the festival. At noon there is usually a big family dinner. In the evening, the whole family admire the full moon and share delicious mooncakes. Grandparents tell the story about Chang'e flying to the moon to their grandchildren. People believe that the full moon is a symbol of reunion and good luck, and they often give best wishes to each other at this special time.
I hope you can come to China and enjoy this festival next year.
Yours,
Li Hua
观点看法类
(涵盖话题:情感与情绪;人际交往)
A
英语课上,老师组织全班同学就“What is happiness?”进行了讨论,下面是你所在小组的讨论结果。假如你是李华,是你们小组的发言人,请你根据表格中的内容准备一篇发言稿,向全班同学汇报你们小组的讨论情况。
要求: 1. 内容要全面,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;
2. 词数不少于 100,发言稿的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Good morning, everybody. Let me share with you our opinions about“What is happiness?” .
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That's all. Thanks for your attention!
B
现在大多数中学生都有或多或少的压力,他们的压力有的来自学习和考试,有的来自父母过高的期望……有些人因为压力而成长,但有些人因为承受不了压力而终日抱怨。本周的英语角活动将围绕“压力”这一话题让同学们发言。请你结合自身情况,并根据下面的写作要点,用英语写一篇短文,为本次发言做准备。
写作要点:1. When do you feel stressed?
2. What do you think of stress?
3. How do you deal with stress?
要求:1. 紧扣话题,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;
2. 词数不少于100,短文的开头和结尾已给出, 但不计入总词数。
It's common to have stress in life. Different people feel stressed in different ways.
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In short, when we have stress, we shouldn't be afraid. We should use it as a tool and deal with it in our own way. If so, we'll lead a happy life.
C
礼貌是拉近自己和他人的一座桥梁,懂礼貌的人会成为一个受欢迎的人。本周五的英语写作课结束后,英语老师给你们布置了一篇作文,让你们围绕“Good manners are necessary because one is judged (判断) by his manners.”这句话写一篇英语作文。
内容包括:1. 谈谈你对这句话的理解;
2. 作为中学生,如何成为有礼貌的人(至少 三点)。
要求:1. 作文内容要紧扣这句话,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;
2. 词数不少于100,作文的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
可能用到的词汇:尊敬 respect
Good manners are necessary because one is judged by his manners.
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假定你校最近组织了一批志愿者到火车站提供服务。请以“Volunteer Activity at Railway Station”为题,给校刊的“英语园地”写一篇英文稿件。内容主要包括:
1. 活动时间和地点;
2. 活动内容:捡垃圾、信息咨询、帮助使用自助售票机(ticket vending machine)等;
3. 你的感想。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(题目已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Volunteer Activity at Railway Station
Last Sunday some volunteers from our school were organized to offer service at the railway station of our city. We were pided into small groups to undertake different tasks. As soon as we arrived at the station at 8:00 am, we got down to work. Some picked up rubbish on the ground and provided information for passengers. Some helped the passengers with heavy baggage. And the rest taught passenger show to use the ticket vending machine.
I learned a lot from the activity and felt happy when receiving grateful thanks. I believe that only by helping each other can we make our society a better place.
假定你是李华,在不久前的美国之行中得到了White夫妇的帮助。请你给他们写一封邮件,内容主要包括:
1. 简述他们对你的帮助;
2. 表达感激之情;
3. 他们来中国。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. and Mrs. White,
I'm writing to tell you that I've had a safe journey back to China and to thank you for your help.
It was my first time to go abroad so I was a bit nervous when I arrived in America. However, the first time I saw you at the airport, I knew from your warm smile that everything would be all right. With your help, I visited so many places of interest and had a better understanding of American culture. In addition, what impressed me most was your considerate care when I was ill, which made me feel at home.
I hope someday you will come to visit China and give me a chance to return your kindness.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,最近创作了一批以“福”字和“鲤鱼跳龙门”(Carps Jumping over the Dragon Gate)为主题的剪纸作品。请你用英语给开艺术品店的美国朋友Tom写封邮件,请他代卖。要点包括:
1. 剪纸艺术简介(中国传统艺术之一,植物、动物或故事均可成为剪纸的题材);
2. 你的作品内涵(“福”字象征好运;“鲤鱼跳龙门”代表勇气和成就);
3. 拟售价格。
注意
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
How are you? I wonder if you could sell some paper-cut works for me. As a traditional Chinese art, paper-cutting has a very long history, whose themes include nearly everything, such as plants, animals and stories. Here are the photos of two paper-cut works carefully made by me. One is the Chinese character Fu, which means good fortune or blessing. The other is named Carps Jumping over the Dragon Gate, which is a symbol of courage and accomplishment. People can use them either as gifts or to decorate their houses. They are only 15.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about paper-cutting, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information.
Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华。自进入高三以来你妈妈不允许你使用智能手机,她认为这会影响学习和视力,而你认为智能手机能解决学习中的困惑且方便与同学交流。你们之间的冲突让你感到很苦恼。请你用英语给某英语报社编辑Mr.Advice写一封信寻求帮助。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Advice,
I am Li Hua, a Senior Three student. I have been troubled by a problem and have to ask you a favor with the hope that you will be kind enough to help me out.
My mother has not allowed me to use my smartphone since the beginning of the new term. In her opinion, smartphones will have a negative effect on my studies and eyesight. However, I don't agree with her. With the phone, I can easily find answers to some difficult questions. Meanwhile, I can share my worries and joys with my friends online, which can help to reduce my stress. What do you think I should do? I'd appreciate it if you can offer me some practical suggestions.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,想去英国做交换生,已写好申请信。给你的外教Mr.Brown写封邮件,请他帮你修改润色一下附件(attachment)中的申请信。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am sorry to disturb you, but I have to ask a favor of you. I'm pleased to know that a high school in Britain is looking for some exchange students from China. I have written an application letter, but I am not very confident about it. I'm worried that there may be some mistakes in language. I wonder if you could spare some time to help me correct the mistakes in the letter and polish it a bit. By the way, you can find it in the attachment. Thank you very much for your kind help again. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,在美国学习期间和寄宿家庭里的孩子Jack结下了深厚的友谊。在回国之际请你给他写一封信,要点如下:
1. 说明写信目的;
2. 回忆你们交往中难忘的事情;
3. 表达感谢与祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
How time flies! Having lived with you for half a year, I've developed a deep friendship with you. I'm writing to tell you how much I value our friendship and how unwilling I am to say goodbye to you. During the past months, you gave me lots of support. I can't forget the days when I was not able to handle culture shock. It was you that showed me how to adjust myself to the new living and learning environment, which helped me pull through the tough days with ease. Thank you for what you have done for me and may our friendship last forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是校报英语专栏的记者。请结合下图内容,以“Parents Are the First and Most Important Teachers”为题为校报写一篇稿件。内容包括:
1. 描述图画内容;
2. 分析图画所反映的社会问题;
3. 针对这个问题谈谈你的看法。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(标题已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:麻将mahjong
Parents Are the First and Most Important Teachers
From the picture we can see a boy is doing his homework while his parents are playing mahjong happily. The topic of the boy's homework is I love my family. However, looking at his parents, he is puzzled and doesn't know what to write about them.
The picture sets us thinking deeply. Parents expect much of their children, but on the other hand, some of them don’t bother to provide their children with a good learning environment. Neither can they make a good role model for their children.
Personally, parents are the first and most important teachers of their children. So parents should pay more attention to their behaviour and set a good example to their children.
假定你是李华,目前在新加坡做交换生。你在网上看到某动物救助中心(Animal Rescue Center)招募志愿者的广告,你有意加入。请用英语写一封申请信,内容主要包括:
1. 自我介绍;
2. 陈述自身的优势;
3. 希望获准。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am an exchange student from China. I've learned from the Internet that you are in need of some volunteers. I am writing to recommend myself.
I have the following advantages: First of all, I am fond of animals and my father is a biology teacher, so I have a good knowledge on how to take care of animals. Second, I don't have classes at weekends, which allows me to have a lot of spare time. More importantly, I have made up my mind to become a vet when I grow up. That is why I'd like to spend more time with animals.
Please give me a chance. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom前几天发来电子邮件询问你暑假里的打算。但你因故未能及时回复。请给他写一封邮件,要点包括:
1. 未能及时回复邮件的原因;
2. 你假期的打算(打工、做志愿者等)。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
I am very sorry that I did not immediately reply to your email the other day. I have been occupied with various exams since last month. As for the upcoming summer vacation, I have made a careful plan to make full use of it. First, I will find a part-time job as a shopper's guide in a supermarket so that I can make some money and gain some social skills as well. Besides, I plan to volunteer in the children's house in my city because I want to help those unfortunate children. If time permits, I will take an online course to learn how to make short films.
Wish you a happy holiday!
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Bill最近将随父母来中国旅游,准备在你所在的城市停留两天。请你用英语给他写一封邮件,内容主要包括:
1. 表示热烈欢迎;
2. 提出游览建议;
3. 提醒注意事项。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Bill,
I am very happy to know that you and your parents will stay in my city for two days. I have always been looking forward to your arrival. Since you will stay in Shandong Province, I suggest you climb the world-famous tourist attraction — Mount Tai, which has a long history, beautiful scenery and a wealth of cultural attractions. As the weather in the mountain varies greatly, it's wise to bring umbrellas or raincoats with you. Time permitting, I'd like to invite you to visit my family and I also plan to show you around my city. Wish you a safe and pleasant trip here.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,目前在伦敦某中学做交换生。你对该校网站上招募暑期夏令营志愿者的广告很感兴趣。请用英语写一封邮件询问相关情况:培训时间和地点、是否交纳培训费用、工作职责、住宿方式等。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir / Madam,
I've learned from the Internet that some volunteers are needed at your summer camp. I am interested in the job opportunity and I am writing to find out more information about it.
First, I'd like to know when and where the volunteers will be trained and whether I have to pay for the training. Second, I am wondering what I am supposed to do for the campers as a volunteer. Third, how would you accommodate the volunteers? Would they stay in the hotel rooms or tents in the open air?
I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,不久前在美国某购物网站购买了一台榨汁机(juicer),使用几天后机器出现故障。当地修理工声明无法维修并建议你与卖家联系。请你用英语给卖家写一封投诉邮件,要点包括:
1. 投诉内容;
2. 要求:换货或退款;
3. 内附收据(receipt)副本。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir / Madam,
I wish to express my dissatisfaction with the juicer that I purchased from your online store on February 5, 2018. At first, it worked with a slight noise and two days later, it completely broke down.
In order to save time, I took it to a local repairman. However, the repairman said he could do nothing and suggested that I turn to you for help. I hope you can exchange it for a new one or give me my money back.
I would appreciate it if you could look into the matter and solve my problem. Enclosed is the copy of the receipt. And I am looking forward to hearing from you within a week.
Thank you.
Yourstruly,
Li Hua
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